tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post7351528349883185684..comments2023-10-01T06:35:44.182-07:00Comments on Wendy's Muse: EmbersWendy Brown-Baezhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01721205358192721048noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-24922131859583388922009-12-16T11:20:52.045-08:002009-12-16T11:20:52.045-08:00A living, dancing poem about opening to love, open...A living, dancing poem about opening to love, opening to sensuality, opening to spirit. <br />I love the rythm and the imagery. <br />Beautiful.Wendy Gillissenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05386895834531577263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-56118578346038119232009-12-13T22:43:24.536-08:002009-12-13T22:43:24.536-08:00This is so gentle and generous at the same time.This is so gentle and generous at the same time.Tamrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08016702051457729026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-10721609767239701712009-12-11T23:29:27.694-08:002009-12-11T23:29:27.694-08:00Like the Chagall you introduce, this poem moves by...Like the Chagall you introduce, this poem moves by surrendering - not a passive stance, but an opening! Beautiful only hints to meaning here.<br /><br />"breath these words - this is the way, only this", says more than words may do. Clean phrasing that leaves no meaning ambiguous. <br /><br />This poem presents craft and meaning, both, and given generously. I as well, appreciate them both.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-45129865845971862902009-12-11T05:14:02.241-08:002009-12-11T05:14:02.241-08:00Like the underlying spirituality...
nature copula...Like the underlying spirituality...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/12/nature-copulates.html" rel="nofollow">nature copulates</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-84028103897687852892009-12-10T21:17:05.662-08:002009-12-10T21:17:05.662-08:00reminded me of Rumi. Love the tactile nature with ...reminded me of Rumi. Love the tactile nature with lines like "Widen your hips, especially..."Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-85246758631225013002009-12-10T19:09:20.955-08:002009-12-10T19:09:20.955-08:00A beautifully expressed song of love. I was happil...A beautifully expressed song of love. I was happily immersed in the imagery. Thank you for sharing this wonderful guide, Wendy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-72022234851920256872009-12-10T17:28:49.595-08:002009-12-10T17:28:49.595-08:00The poem does have a lovely lyrical quality which ...The poem does have a lovely lyrical quality which is hard to achieve. Also there is a touch of the scripture about it.Well done!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-44358722035811583882009-12-10T17:03:21.391-08:002009-12-10T17:03:21.391-08:00Give in to love, a mantra.Give in to love, a mantra.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-293474690630197431.post-70301166626892484522009-12-10T13:57:10.609-08:002009-12-10T13:57:10.609-08:00I really like the "if " "then"...I really like the "if " "then" form you use for much of this; it reminds me of the ballad form of troubador songs, and some since that emulate them. The last stanza shakes this up, though it remains imperative, finishing by becoming even more lyrical.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com